Oh wow... the intro was so god damn catchy at the beginning, I decided to become late for my exams for this piece... damn you illumatiks, i've lost a good portion of time X_x.
Heh, nuf bout that, lets go onto the REVIEW!!
Hmm, well its got a very stable, very well built foundation, giving plenty of room for vocals and yet just as much room for any additions you might.
That repeating guitar melody you introduced was so strange, and yet fit right in there. Never would have thought of hearing that in there, well blended.
Don't get me startd with the piano, I love the piano and the melody you made it play t'was great!
For some suggestions.
I heard a flute in there somewhere, I think you should make it a bit louder, lets its voice be heard.
The drum beat is solid, no need to modify or change that, making it faster would make it disruptive to the flow, slower would not be fast enough.
5/5 illumatiks, keep them coming.