The music is actually very nice for a general rock. The guitars have a very strong presence all over the song and the main melody from the guitar is quite catchy. The vocals are also not bad.
However, one of the reasons why the main melody is catchy it's because it is repeated several times. Also, the lyrics don't change that often which tires the listener very fast. Although the singer does have some potential, the lady (that sings with him) should definitely be more active in the music because her voice fits very nicely, gives a new and fresh tone to the music and makes the listener expect something more (perhaps a " singing dialogue" between the man and the woman, with both answering to each other in the song would be nice?).
Finally, to end my review, I must say I expected so much more from the end. You just end nearly abruptly with some tonal accords ... I was expecting some sort of climax to go with the end, but I guess I have to be happy with what you guys did.
If the rest of your album is as good as this music then I am sure it is a pretty good album. I wonder where I can hear the rest.
I would also like to request the author the lyrics (post them in the Author comments please). It is always nice to follow them when you are listening to the music, and the folks here at NG would appreciate it.