(This review is just my opinion and I have no intention to offend. If you disagree with me then of course you have every right to do so :D )
I can see how you're going for the orchestrated feel, that is a given, based on the melodic style and drum setting. The oriental feel from this song is nice.
However, I feel as the synths you're using (I assume those are synths) have the attack factor cracked a little far down when they're playing the softer sections. I'm not saying that it shouldn't ease in during the envelope, but it just shouldn't liquidize and slosh around so much. This kind of makes the melody loose its impact and its direction for that matter. My listening experience is also damped a little by that crash sample first heard around 1:06.
But I enjoyed this verily and the melody is great for this short loop but I feel as you could do better.
Thanks man, helps a lot.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.