better you are getting much better.Well i guess Mr-green and dj here all ready pointed most of your mistakes and some extra things so ill just drop a 10 and a 5 on your head.
nah i just right reviews i dont bring peoples scores down the rating system jacked anyway but yea dont mind checkin out peoples stuff and givin some advice/opinions. like the intro good kick and i like the plucked whatever ya got. good highhat to. like the opening synth at like 50. good mix to start with the kick and base and what not. lol 14 mb song takin forever to load haha. decent progression. got some decent trance goin here. feelin this. since this trance id throw like a pad section around 2:30 just drop everything and get a good build up with a nice pad and some fx. somethin ta think about for future trance tracks. drop the kick and everything and just have a 30 sec pad section to kinda mellow out the song and bring it back in with a nice build up. one thing id suggest is this track need a longer progression kinda get tired of it at like 3 mins gets kinda repetitive. but yea definitely getting better pretty decent track
Thanks a lot! I will focus on the things you named..
that one synth haha.
it comes in around like :40 really awesome. you got to tell me how u made/where u got it. The song really starts to build around 2:30, i like it. I think you should add another instrument thats kind of pad sounding to make it even more epic like what you did for the last 2 minutes and maybe some more parts. the part at 4:20 sounds sick, did you intentionally do that becuz its at 4:20? Overall its really good, id shorten the intro though.
the synth you mean are just normal chords on a dance sawic sound. I thnk you like the chords more than the synth it self.
But I wanted to have something special for the last 2 minutes. Thats why I putted that in. But I think I will use this style more often.
Thx for the review :) and the intro is that long because I love long songs, so I also want to make them :P.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.