Life of way
Your voice has a great sound! And you record it well. It also had a nice pace!
The character needs a little bit more consistency to me, What i mean by that is some of the things you say don't sound like the same voice in other parts that you say in this piece.
Also at :47 you switched the written word for "life of way"
I liked it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.