That was really nice. Everything was where it was supposed to be. I really only have suggestions, no critisism.
Try to add a piano, i would really give the song a little life,in my opinion, but nothing to fast, just a background mooder.
And you could try to add something in the intro couse it was a tad slow.
Other than that the piece was awsome
*clicky clicky 5*
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