And appropriate instruments. It does sounds like circus.
But the drums are not good.
They are badly placed at 0:02, and you should try to make them less loud.
Other than that the melody and bass are nice, but you MUST do something for the battery.
Maybe you could make it longer (a song instead of a loop) . That's a good start :)
lol i should've mentioned that i made this for the sole purpose to drive people mad. :)