nine outa ten since its so short. i like the flow and melody though. the first time i listened to it i didnt even realize it had restarted and was playing again i thought it was on the first round. props for a good ending.
But it lacks of alot of stuff. Try more effects on the lead (f9 in FLP) and try to make the hihat change somewhere in the song, to give it a more "powerful" feel :) I love the groove of this, but it's just lackin... Hope we can collab some day man :D
The imagery I got from this song was PRICELESS. The chopped up melody was calming, yet as you stated, also exciting. The strings in the background served only to amplify this feeling. As a result I had some messed up images happening, I loved them all.
If your going to use the strings, I say why not expand on that. Perhaps introduce a small piano riff, or perhaps a booming iron bell when the melody suddenly jumps, and then after a slight riff, goes back to the original melody.
5/5, keep them coming or die.
hah, thnk you for the review. i like your ideas and i may just incorporate them into my next song. iwasnt sure of the strings because they were a little off but w/e.