Some interesting ideas.
You seem to be using filters rather arbitrarily, possibly spend a little more time trying to shape where you want them to be utilized.
There is not a whole lot of sense of progression or flow to what you have. Melody line is solid but on the whole you're trying to squeeze too much utility out of it.
Drums aren't bad when they are present, but they seem to drop off randomly. If this is meant to emphasis a change somewhere else in the song, you should probably make that change more prominent (texture shift or new instrument entrance, rather than just the volume boost) so that the drums re-entering is a bigger statement.
Not a bad start, but keep on working on it.
Yeah but Like I said though, I made it really quick.