As RyeGuyHead said, "wish you did more with the 16th notes on the bassline" basically sums up what I was going to say at first.
I liked the panning you did with that weird wishy-washy noise, it sounded like someone was rinsing their mouth out with listerine next to my ears haha, it was interesting though, +1 originality =)
Now this is all personal perference... but I think it'd be better if you included more instruments/sounds in the hi end of your songs. You have a lot of powerful bassy stuff playing all the frequencies 2kHz and below and it makes your songs seem "heavy" which isn't bad if you going for a dark song but the cost of doing that is it does sorta make the song seem less crisp/fresh. That's why I gave you an 8 for clarity for this song and "I see the light" because you have beefy basses crowding up the 5Hz - 1kHz range, but normally when people do that their song sounds muddy but in this song's case the bass was quite clear, which doesn't make much sense in theory, unless you set up some really good compression.
Also, your guitar was fine in my opinion, but only by it's self in the spot light. I liked it until you played both it and the little bell melody together, the amount of reeverb you put on your guitar just kinda made it run into the bell melody and make things messy... but again, that's more of a personal perference kinda thing anyway.
5 outta 5 from me because you have interesting ideas within the song.