"Needs a lot more work..."
Well you said it. From what I have heard there are only three instruments being used, the main synth, that chime-sounding thing and the bass. ADD MORE! It gets repetitive wayyyyy too fast, faster than what a trance song should be. You stuck with one instrument the entire time and didn't bother expanding on anything else thus giving you an end product of a 52 second song that gets boring fast.
Now that I got the bad out of the way, it's time for the good. The melody is great for what you are starting with. It has a nice addictive feel to it and it's upbeat and fast, which is what I like in a trance song.
Overall, you have the starting grounds for a great song, yet the diversity and variations with instruments kills it. I look forward to listening to your other songs, as long as you keep building upon what you have here. Then you will get a 10 and a 5 from me. Good luck with your future works.