I can see why
The beginning sounded good like something epic was coming. I was waiting for a big drop with dat bass and at 1:06 I thought it had come but I was somewhat disappointed :( The part at 1:38 definitely took the song in a different direction than what was expected. Overall though it was pretty good, I liked the first minute the best.
Thank you Dave, I think I agree with you that the song sounded epic at the beginning, then I somehow managed to mess it up soon after. Progress is being made to re-make it. :)