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Jan 21, 2006 | 3:12 PM EST
File Info
3.6 MB
5 min 14 sec
2.67 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.67 / 5 stars
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523 Plays | 212 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

My first full beat I hope you enjoy it, comment and criticisms are welcome,



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


The drums have a nice beat, but their relative volumes should be considered a little more (there's that one really loud one that keeps jumping out... I doubt that this is intentional). The arpeggiation, in the guitar/harp/whatever, is a little too complicated in my opinion. A "beat" doesn't have to be melodically interesting, even though it *can* be melodic, a lot of the time it's better for it to be very simple and just hang out, and even dropping out all of the pitched instruments from time to time can be a very effective technique. It's not about making sure there's a note in every beat of the song, it's about getting your point across. I'm looking forward to hearing your next submission.

thedon61 responds:


sorry i could respond earlier, just been stuck with a lot of work of late,
i worked on my two new submissions before i read your review, and i kind of did the opposite of what you recommended, but I'll rework them using ur suggestions, thanks for the really helpful criticisms, ill try to post more work as soon as i can find the time,