You've got good effects going on here!
The first rapper's volume is too low, I can barely understand him.
The second rappers volume is good, but at one point it gets too loud and distorts.
I liked the first rappers section, because of the delay effects that was used.
Also a rap about vampires?! Heh, i've NEVER heard something like this, it was pretty neat.
Also the beat was solid, but the kick and bass is too high, making it distorted.
4/5 this time Misery, keep them coming.