Yeah, more kick
The main melody is fine, but the kick needs to be much heavier with more punch as well a bass line (as ClimbLadders said). Other than that, you're perfect.
Sandstorms are hungry.
I've notice you've brought up your kicks. But, it still could use a solid bass line, like an instrument. the kicks are still a bit too low. I think I hear some kind a cymbal in the background. Sounds awesome, but I think it's better raised.
The rhythm, the bell sounds, and everything else sounds good though. I definitely the rhythm at 3:56-4:00. The bass you've added sounds good, but it still is too low.
Keep up the great work!
It was okay.
Of course remix of that classic is always nice to hear, but the problem is that:
-It needs just more work
-Louder basskick, or bassline
There was effort but it could've been better. My opinion.
Needs more power
I think it would sound much better if it had more bass. Its now kinda weak