Oh God, great job!
The bass noise has a bite to the ears that kinda gives me that nail-on-chalkboard feeling, but I can't judge, since If I were to use the sound it would sound greater than hot-cakes to myself. Assuming that hotcakes make noise. I'm thinking if you change the frequency and make the bass stand out more than the static it would sound cooler, but that's my taste. People don't like my taste I don't think, so you have done fine right? Yeah
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