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Apr 7, 2011 | 2:46 PM EDT
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3.1 MB
2 min 43 sec
4.36 / 5.00

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Rated 4.36 / 5 stars
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Made with fl studio, still in the learning stage ; )



Rated 3 / 5 stars


Well, it wasn't really super, but not bad.

Intro: Well, the beginning had wrong instruments following up. The synths weren't playing in exact symphasy, and that's really bad. At least use another plugin. The drums kicked in at a bad clearly ruined the rythem's pace. The bass could have used a lot more of echoing. The small tinckle bell sounded like a pain. Use a heavier bell for this.

Middle: the small bell continued to play, and that's the worst part of this song. As mentioned earlier, it needs at least a heavier bell or a different plugin. At 1:25 is where the rythem collapsed, and this wasn't needed. At 1:42, the song was clearly ruined. You must not have done this part. It stayed in a bad position until 2:09.

End: nothing special about it, quite the same as the beginning. Not good. There must have been additional notes and instruments. A climax needs these qualities.

So overall, a 6/10, 3/5. This song could use a LOT of improvement.

~The Liberaten
--spelling and grammar not revised.

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aenmj responds:

Just so you know, I've used three instruments in this one, no edits and such. I can change that next time, indeed.

I liked how high the 'bell' was, but that's more of an opinion

I do admit that I should have let the song stop at 1:42. No idea what I was thinking at the time and made the repetitive part not come back. The song slowly died in the end, so you're right.

I don't agree with that a song needs a climax. Sure, it sounds nice, but it isn't a necessity.

You have given me a higher score than expected, so thanks. I won't be revising this one though.