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Renegade

Beat stolen from FrankNice lol

http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/385068

Yo listen to the music that ya choose
do you gain something or do you just lose
they all talk fast think slow and just do
the same damn thing they're told to
if ya ask me slap the cat that sold you
a record going platium if they told you
it's the truth
cuz they sell you a dream keep the change and soul too
if you truely believe the games better new school
than fuck you

I'ma be open
This is just Nolen
Since I stopped smoking
they say I'm just not the same in the brain
like I took my self out a frame
then became the frame to hold myself through the pain
but at the same damn time as I'm walkin through the rain
someone else feels the shine
with the shine on their side
left broken inside
I fight for what's right
and I fight for the right to write
with lady on my right
I need no drugs through the night
with the love of a wife
it's hard to feel strife
but the pain seeps through
if your feelings are true
why don't you do tell the truth in the booth
like ya can't feel right
Whats left is a plight
Im'a mess without with a mic
and I'm stressed with a strong dislike
for those who stereotype

With your eyes wide shut ya can't see the light
Hold fist right up if your tired of the lies
Cuz no matter how you try no matter what you do
the truth they'll always hide
It's time for an uprise define freedom ina mental cage
forced to throw it on paper
an instrumental rage
everyday I turn another page
just to see it burn in flames
a Renegade in this place
They generalize while they generate lies
federal ties committin' federal crimes
I'm ready for a revolution
Renegade I'll break the chains of mediocre constitution
I'll break your state of mind and free you from illusions
cuz this nation is racing to execution
face it this race is basic and I ain't losing
born to spit this my restitution .

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Plain and simple

I don't agree with the "generic sounding" comment. Not every track was meant to be lyrical rip your head off and shit down your neck type songs. If that was the case everyone would say you do it too much (Canibis was a perfect example of that). A couple of my tracks are more introspective and have more of a meaning behind them emotionally without having the flashy lyrics. Medaphores and wordplay, yes, but not so much flash and astounding vocabulary. If you're getting a point across, sometimes it's better to be subtle so the listener can understand your music.

Good job, period.

Stay up,

Nimbus The General

UselessTalent responds:

Exactly

Thank YOU!
lol

Yo--------------

Respect, man. Please email the acapella to me so I could mix it nice. Send me a PM for the email address.

UselessTalent responds:

hopefully Ill have it
I'll definitely send it to you
mad respect by the way bro

Damn

Im Feeling This Hard Bro.

Real Shit Niigga.

UselessTalent responds:

Means alot coming from a nugga like you mang
I'm glad you like it bro

Stay up

Not bad

Work on your rhythmic technicalities. It gets a little dull after a while if the lyrics aren't straight crazy. You had some okay lines, but it came off a little generic. The little speel at the beginning should be done away with. It makes it very clear that you are very white, which means you shouldn't say "n***a", ha ha. The beat was good, but like you said it was stolen, which isn't a biggie. I do it all the time.

Also, work on your pronunciation. If I weren't reading the lyrics, I would've been totally lost. Maybe EQ your vocals to make the consonants a little more bright. You should check out my latest tracks on my channel, perhaps we can do a collab sometime or something.

Pro lyrics

I don't care if you stole the beat from someone else, the lyrics are insane

UselessTalent responds:

Thank ya mangs I do appericiate it

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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
4.70 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 6, 2011
11:04 PM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Olskool
File Info
Song
3.7 MB
4 min 6 sec

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