The start was pretty good, singing needs a little work but its not that bad. The chorus however is terrible . . . I'm guessing you were goin for a Nirvana type thing but it just didn't work. You should definatly redo this song, it could be really cool
i didnt really have a set direction actually, i knew it was gonna be grungy, thats about it
should i re do the lyrics for the chorus? or is the whole chorus wrong?
things id like to know,
it was ok
you probably put a lot of work into that and i hope u make more songs
haha, to tell the truth...i didnt...maybe an hour...tops...but i plan on adding more soon...keep coming back, people fuel creativity