Yeah

Nice! I like it!
It's just like when I am making songs: just starting, and following it where it wants to go.
You are right this fits to introduction or title screen. But it will also fit in game, yeah I'm pretty sure. In a somewhat action game, and what not.

I rated 5, not 4, to give it a chance against those who rates 0 to every entry (really noticed that on my own songs (no they're not bad)).

Anyway, I really enjoyed this (listened to it while writing this)! The piano part at 0:45 is really good! Love the intro, piano and flute; Where did you get the flute sample? I need flute too :P...
And the part after that, it reminds me of desert, or at least music from something that reminds me of desert.
Well I can't take the time to fill this review with all my feelings about this song, so I will stop here ;)

There is hope for this.

I'll never forgive myself for that summary.

But really, I like this a lot. You have a good sense of music, and this is a prime example.

Took me to many places, Egyptian tombs, clouds, so on.

Good stuff.

My only criticism is the snare drum sound, it sounded a little flat. But the actual drum lines are quite something.