at second 10-14 you have a great oppurtunity to expand into a tertiary line of melody to expand, but its good as a loop too. always nice to see flexible tunes.
Yeah I felt that too, ill work on it man :)
Definitely expand its a good little phrase but the whole minute of it repeating just killed it for me haha. Work it through as an intro or something and have it build up somewhere with drums and another melody on top. The gated trance thing could be louder too, the main instrument overpowers everything too much.
Yeah man I feel you, ill work on it though :)
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