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Hey man, you should have told me you uploaded this. I was looking for a download.
I'll give it a 10 since its your very first song. And if you want some help on improving head over to the bbs and check out the review request club in the audio forums. Post a link, and people will come over and tell you what can be done to improve. I already gave you my 2 cents though. This is a good site, I think you'll like it here.