Ow my ears.
Sorry, pal. Try again.
It was Very nice for a demo.
I dont have any critisism exept that the intro was a tad to long
Other than that i hope you finish it couse it is really nice :)
good... but not enough
It get's a nice steady pulse going by the end.
It's a shame you didn't evolve the song a bit more.
I'd say you should definately work off this one; it's got much potential.