There's one main problem.
There's one main problem with the song. There's no flow. You can't really listen to it, it doesn't have any real flow to it. I don't really know how to explain it, but it's just TOO cut up. I mean yeah, it's a decent effect, but music is more than that. It needs flow.
thanks man i take that into consideration next time and i kinda agree now after i have listening to it a couple times thanks for the review again thou