dude love the intro rift!very nice work here.only thing i would say to improve is to work on your transitions.and your composition.try to not have the sound just stop and start i with a new lead,and try looking up different styles of compositions to lay out your song! also your build ups are pretty good! keep it up man!
thanks. I took this into consideration, and now am working on an extendid version of this extended version. yeah, I'll try to make it not jup in as much.
thanks for the review!
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