Slow and Steady
I think you attempted to bring in another synth around 37 seconds in but it was too low to hear it clearly.It would be nice to bring that out more and maybe continue it through more of the song.I do like the slow and steady progression though.Keep it up.I know feedback is something alot of people don't bother to do (me included...sometimes).
THNK U!!! i love people who comment it makes me better! and this is my first submission using fruity loops! so im getting better as i go along. i used to use garage band which sucks alot. garage band is more of a preset loop program and that makes it hard to make original pieces. all of my works of art are original! but fruity loops akes it easier. and an update of this song will be up soon. the synth u said to bring didnt really fit too well when brought up. i asked many experienced people that agreed with me but i will take your advice and try some better progression
Srry, i cant think of anything else to say. I'm really lazy today >.<
:P your better than most people who don't even put a response SO CONGRATS AND THNX FOR UR COMMENT