good concept lack of substance
First off, This is not Trance! when you post your music please do so in the right category, this belongs in either electronica, or miscellaneous.
Now on the actual song, it was an interesting concept, good funny track through and through. It could easily be flushed out with a bit of work. you need more of a beat breakdown, as well as a shift to mix up the continuity. perhaps a synthy kind of interlude or the like. also if you throw a decent bassline in there it could really help things go a long way.