pretty nice!!

I actually want to hear this as a videogame loop,
it's not very distracting, which can alway be used.
GREAT SONG!!!

Has great potential

Had me hooked in the first 30 seconds, but after that it got too...'boppity.' The melodies and rhythm were right, it just wasn't using the appropriate synths. Make it louder, less happy and more edgy, and then you might have something worthy of a ten.

Nice

Sweet beat. Keep makin more music 4 our ears. :)

Hmm

I wouldn't say this is particularly memorable, or that it has the best transitions, but it's not a bad start by any means. Keep making tracks, keep improving. You get about 1% better each time you make a track. So keep giving it your all, and I'm sure you'll become great!

merlin