This is pretty funny! Did you get an A?
Nice writing, you could be the drug addled Dr. Seuss for the ghetto childens.
the recording is a little poor, your mic doesn't seem up to the challenge.
Overall i like it but it could use some polish 6/10 3/5
Thanks for the review! My mic is actually my camera. I record myself saying the lines, and then convert it to a mp3 file. I'm working on buying a real mic though.