This is very GOOD
1:20-1:42 very very VERY nice tune you've got going there and made excellent use of the panning :D
A couple of things,
-you're intro was good, but could use some filtering and maybe some fading in/out
-the 1:20-1:42 part (as I said) was absolutely brilliant, BUT, the drum build up was lacking depth, the synth volume was pretty weak compared to the drums (don't know if that's what you were going for), maybe higher volume would fix it, because it doesn't sound right.
-the "chorus" was really nice. I would highly recommend using a sub bass here. If you're using FL studios, use the Sytrus sub bass patch under "Bass", works all right. It was however, kinda weak, maybe some blood overdrive, reeverb or even distortion would make it better than it already is.
-you're drum patterns are fine and the song in general is very good. I couldn't believe it was rated only 2.25/5 when I got here!
I really enjoyed it :D
Hope this helps :) I'd really like you to add to this because I am really digging it.
Good job mate and keep up the good work