mmm mmm good.
This song makes me imagine a girl dumping a dude that is in love with her. Kinda letting him down soft.
I am temped to write a guy-response w/ some acoustic guitar or something!
10 minutes of lyric brainstorming along those lines:
Now I know that the veil has been lifted.
You were feigning the love I thought we shared.
Now I know your true feelings about me
You're telling the truth, for once, it seems....
You stole my heart broke my ribs into splinters.
Now you're free to steal others' hearts again.
Now I feel dark compulsions inside me
It's best that we never meet again.
The sustain you get on that first "seeeeeeems' is amazing. You are awesome.
You're very precise with the 'fight it' lyrics, but the 'forgive' kinda sounds like 'fergive.' Did you try a more formal pronunciation and find it too cumbersome?
good full piano, and vocals
Well done. interesting melody. Vocal are well performed but could be mixed higher
simply beautiful. I have no words.
I was distracted with the tv until I heard your voice singing and I'm like wait that's hania XD. Even though this is a reworked piece your music is still amazing. You have an amazing singing voice and a great talent for music. I enjoy hearing all your music. Anyways I can't find anything bad to say so I can't be a critic today so lucky you lol. Nice job hania.
You have a very soothing voice. Along with the lyrics, and soft piano, it's powerful enough to invoke emotions in the right setting, yet soft enough, to help ease a grown insomniac to sleep. 5/5 10/10 from more. I would LOVE to hear more like this from you. Please keep up the good work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.