Goddamn dude nice work! The beat and lyrics work flawlessly together to create a very vivid scene. Sad to see you haven't submitted here in a decade, love your writing and creativity.
Phade ft. J. Colley - Partyin' Again
Currently beginning to work on my first album, "Where The Conversation Stops". This is the second single off of the album and was pretty much based off my first experience at a party that involved drugs.
I'm not a heavy drug user, but I found that it is the most relaxed enviroment I've ever felt, amazingly because every person in there seemed to be at ease. We were all mentally tamed by substance and it lowered us to simply being on the same level.
I really enjoyed the party and I've now reconciled with an old friend. I hope that you can enjoy listening to this song as much I enjoyed writing it. I know there are flaws. I've given up on being a perfectionist because I'm not much trying to impress anyone. It was fun for me.
If you have any criticism, I'd be happy to respond. Just leave a comment below and please try to be honest and productive with your opinions. It is impossible to make everyone happy, but I would like to know how to make you love listening even more!
If you actually made it through all of this, I thank you as a reader as well. Enjoy the song, or whats left of it and leave me some feedback!
[I specifically love people describing their favorite parts, so leaving one would be very enjoyable. :P ]
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[Lyrics]
Intro
(Cracking of a can.)
(Subtle laughing)
(Shutting the booth door.)
"Yeah. J Colley. Phade. Back at it again, man."
"You know we had to do it again."
"Back at it."
Chorus
There's a party uptown so whoever is down,
hop in the coupe and grab a friend.
Because were partying now, until the sun goes down
and we'll be at it until it rises again.
Then we'll all pass out, take a good long shower,
make sure we're feeling right.
Then we all get fly and hop back in the ride,
Because were partyin' again tonight.
Verse One - Phade
At the party kind of early, but it'll start poppin' soon.
Smoke surrounds the crowd like we locked a cloud in the room.
As far as hot girlies, this shit does not end.
Skirts, skirts and more skirts like I invaded Scotland.
Guys sitting around chilling, girlies taking their hands.
Any spot that isn't taken is a place we can dance.
They decide to change the music, the CD slot opens.
And the music may stop but we never quit going.
Adventurers on the roof, ping pong balls in the sink.
Go deep diving in the cooler and discover a drink.
Words colder than Uranus, girls hotter than mars.
And some random guy playing an acoustic guitar.
Drums on the floor, and rock band on the wall.
And a few people too drunk to stand up in the hall.
Alcohol on deck! We got plenty of cups
And dudes that'll bruise all of you, who won't shut the fuck up.
Chorus
There's a party uptown so whoever is down,
hop in the coupe and grab a friend.
Because were partying now, until the sun goes down
and we'll be at it until it rises again.
Then we'll all pass out, take a good long shower,
make sure we're feeling right.
Then we all get fly and hop back in the ride,
Because were partyin' again tonight.
Verse Two - J. Colley
Everybody is smoking, everybody is drinking.
Everybody's wilding out and nobody is thinking.
That dank, that drank, got everybody feeling right.
We're all on cloud 9, at least that's what were feeling like.
Get loud, act wild, go ahead and grab some bottles.
We gonna do it real big, then do it all again tomorrow.
Four Lokos, somebody pass me a tilt.
If you don't take that drink, I promise someone else will.
Everybody is passin' out, all over the floor.
Wakin' up trying to remember what happened the night before.
What clothes I wore, and why the hell am I naked?
All I know was partying, kited, zoned, wasted.
What the hell was I drinking, that must have been crazy.
Did anybody have a camera, I hope somebody taped it.
Take a shower, then I'll just freshen up a bit.
I'm going out tonight, fuck it, we'll do it again.
Chorus - Ending (x2)
Goddamn dude nice work! The beat and lyrics work flawlessly together to create a very vivid scene. Sad to see you haven't submitted here in a decade, love your writing and creativity.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.