this is great

this would be a great song.
a guys anther guy in the face
the song plays and the guy kills more dudes

wow you are fu$#%$ crazy

what is taking place in your mind? whatever it is i like it man. you have a very unique style and good melody variety. 5/5

Love the bassline (or whatever you call it)

5/5 Nice job.
Try adding a sub bass, with a bit of depth from that, this could be an even better song than it already is!!!

Keep up teh good work :D