Just a little poem I made for the song, it means nothing unless you make a meaning for it. i just think it would sound supper cool layered over the song in some robot vocoder chant.
Gamma waves of radiation,
invades the brains thought rotation,
to Stockholm chants in "quotations",
echo vast in youthful nations,
bound them now by incarceration,
lash the whip inflict laceration,
brake there will of temptation,
just to make an abomination
and if they last the evocation,
they are granted mass from elevation...
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So yeah review the song, thumbs up, thumbs down, download vote or just leave a note im all fine with it all and all you do and what you do for me i will do for you :P
nah for real if yeah give a little feed back i will check you out and give some feed back on your page as well.
I agree!
Trickso is right. "Chill and relaxing." If they played this song in the waiting room of, well, anywhere I had to wait, I would not go stir crazy. It would also make a good second song or right before the finale finisher on an album. Good job man.
thanks
Fairly Decent.
There's nothing generally wrong, it just seems to be repetitive
Thanks for the comment Spyduhmahn.
Wow DeanFry66
It'd be pointless if every musician did the same thing, and annoying. Perhaps you should open your eyes and be willing to adopt a new style. Now for my review on this song...
I personally think it sounds good, it's got the feel of something that'd be used in the background of a video game. Really chill and relaxing.
yeah that dude is a retard but back to my response.
Yeah man thanks for the review, yeah its really chilled up, i wanted this smooth relax feel you use to hear in them old as hip hop songs you hear undergrounds dude spit on.
like a failed try to be haywyre. xD
Not bad...
There needs to be more happening in a track like this though. Get a little more variation in on the drumline and the gated synth lead thingy, add in some instruments that break the bassy sine heavy background. It sounds too blurry and muddy, you need something to slice through it... like vinegar cuts through oily things.
And stick a limiter or a compressor on this for heavens sake, the amount of distortion was inexcusable for this level of production.
yeah its rough draft math dude, i got yeah, as for the compressors i blow at that shit i send it off to a buddy of my to EQ my tracks.
I fell it does need more progression and if you have any ideas on how i would do that or go about it please give your thoughts!
the drums is basic not going to lie not my best work but shit i always do the drums last when im finishing this song.
as for the Gated synth i will leave it like it is, its not meant to be the main part of the song just some thing to even the highs the mids and lows.
I like that old school bass feel though it is a bit murky as you pointed out.
thanks for the notes man and i will be taking your opinion in to considerations!
Not Worth Listening To...
I honestly do not like it, its got no catch, no speciality about it and its just pure rubbish to the ears.
With a song it has to have a "catch" this catch can be placed at the beginning or in the middle of the song, as an example listen to Johnny B. Goode by Chuck Berry and then listen to Teenage Dirtbag by Wheatus, you will notice that the "catch" for Johnny B. Goode is at the beginning while Teenage Dirtbag's catch is in the middle of the song.
The song also has to sound completely an original, something you cannot just compare to other music, Michael Jackson is an example as with his music you can easily tell apart which song is which.
Now I don't expect you to be as good as these legends but I expect for you to learn and hopefully at least understand music and to be able to provide Newgrounds or any other site decent music, always aim to beat your number 1 hit song and you can't go wrong.
Well swing and a miss there Deanfry66,
as you feel your review was insightful or some what helpful, you neglected to relies you rambled on about nothing with any relevance.
Chuck Berry wrote rock and roll songs in the 1958, so you comparing me to him is like a comparing a "stick with sting on it" to an Xbox...
and Teenage Dirtbag by Wheatus was made in 2000 and guess what... IT WAS A FUCKING ROCK SONG!
so why dont you kick your self in to high gear cus the year 2011 you jack fuck retard.
you can compare any music with any other as you so brightly pointed out as you compare me to a black guy in 50s then a white frat boy from the 80s so contradictions all around you dumb ass!
as for for the pep talk at the end... are you a retard? I'm not fucking ash ketchum looking to be the next poke' mon master of koto! i don't give a fuck about the number one spot on NG or the record charts I'm just looking for some feed about on the feel the style and emotions that this harbors. it was never about numbers it was all about the art...
so you win the game on clearly missing the point.
so you can politely stick your review up your ass and die cus your not worth the space you take up on the earth, you worthless sac of functioning organs
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