Not Worth Listening To...
I honestly do not like it, its got no catch, no speciality about it and its just pure rubbish to the ears.
With a song it has to have a "catch" this catch can be placed at the beginning or in the middle of the song, as an example listen to Johnny B. Goode by Chuck Berry and then listen to Teenage Dirtbag by Wheatus, you will notice that the "catch" for Johnny B. Goode is at the beginning while Teenage Dirtbag's catch is in the middle of the song.
The song also has to sound completely an original, something you cannot just compare to other music, Michael Jackson is an example as with his music you can easily tell apart which song is which.
Now I don't expect you to be as good as these legends but I expect for you to learn and hopefully at least understand music and to be able to provide Newgrounds or any other site decent music, always aim to beat your number 1 hit song and you can't go wrong.