yeah, the intro was a little strange. However as it progressed, it was really good!
And you were right, when the guitar kicked in, it became a lot better.
This is my advice.
The guitar is too quiet, I can't hear it properly. Also I feel the guitar instrument itself could be modified, perhaps add a reverb, delay, and overdrive effect to it. Maybe not all of them, that might be overkill, but that guitar part should be worked on.
Still very good.
i'd give you 4.4/5, but unfortunatly it has to be whole, so 4/5.
Keep em coming.
Thanks for the review, your reviews are really great :D
Yeah, I need to work on leveling, I have this problem with all my songs it seems: It's either too quiet, or it's loud enough, but then it's peaky and distorted. I've just got to practice ^__^
Thanks for the great review :D