Impressed

yeah, the intro was a little strange. However as it progressed, it was really good!

And you were right, when the guitar kicked in, it became a lot better.

This is my advice.

The guitar is too quiet, I can't hear it properly. Also I feel the guitar instrument itself could be modified, perhaps add a reverb, delay, and overdrive effect to it. Maybe not all of them, that might be overkill, but that guitar part should be worked on.

Still very good.

i'd give you 4.4/5, but unfortunatly it has to be whole, so 4/5.

Keep em coming.