hey SRG,

thanks for the review. you make some very valid points. it needs a development, believe me, the melody line i have, i.e vocals resolves that issue. I also feel it needs percussion, a nice drum pattern, about midway in, just to bind the overall mix. I will say, i made this tonight/today depending on country, i'm in manchester uk, from about 4-6 am i made this lol, full of wine and after a harsh 12 hour shift after a another 12 hour shift. It is a work in progress and i intend to do more with it. my ears are dead tho, and i'm still without a proper midi control. You know something? I actually intended for the violins to drop, mainly cos there is guitar and vocal lines to be added, i didnt want to dominate my track with strings. I'm renowned on here for doing exactly that. again thank you for the review. I will get round to reviewing your song, i'm not a dudstep fan at all though, and so i may not do justice to it, i'll try though.

peace and hugs

pbj