Unfulfilled drop after the build
The pulse of one of your synths at :15 and subsequently after that is pushing the limits for a clipping threshold on my speakers.
A lot of nice and interesting effects going on here. Panning and volume variances all come together to make up for the lack of a strong melody or melodic sense during the piece. This however does not eliminate all sense of repetition.
The drop is well done, if a bit clippy. But it just drops away at 2:38 really abruptly. It feels... disjointed and disappointing. There was no resolution, just suddenly we're back to the building stage.
The retransition to a heftier beat works but this feels incomplete.
Good luck on your future work, you clearly have an interest in sound design and good effects usage.