Interesting

Its a good track so far. Only one concern is the chip, it has a harsh/clashing with the other chip note at about 00:57, just listen from 00:53 to 01:00 and you should hear it slightly, but short of the slight clash with the chip earlier its really good. (I'm assuming its chip sounds something like a preset in sytrus) Keep up the good work it sounds really cool =] Not that great a composer myself but my first submission to NG might be up in about 50 million years and maybe you can help me critique my work as well =)