for a beginner, awesome
you really have the feel down
the ambience in the background is really good
but try to use different rhythms and not just short quarter notes
also, when you combine short sounds with a long drawn out background, it kinda clashes
the air rush sound in the beginning is really cool, use it more lol
Thought I check back to looking at my old songs and I find another comment wootness~ XD
Indeed I can agree that the Quarter notes are a bit much, but this was my first song that I made so yeah variety was kinda sparse for me ahahaha :D
Indeed Windy sound effect was one of my favorite things to work with, though I had a hard time trying to figure out how to fit it in but seems I didn't do to badly though.
Thanks for your Review it's actually given me a general idea of where I should be practicing on more.