the beat is cool, but i think it needs alittle more tune in it. if u use fl studio, try adding the mixer ''soundgoodilizer'' and ''fruity reverb'' to the songs, so that they sound like HQ songs. nice lyrics too!
ye just need a better mike, n ye... still getting used 2 the controls on fl, thanx bro
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.