I loved the intro. Kind of a spacey-trancey-uppity...Idk...I'm high. But anyways, I really felt like it was going to build into something awesome, yet was disappointed to hear it only pick up again with the same basics beats. It sounded more like an ambient-ish (I was expecting like hard drum-n-bass).
Sorry, I'm a big critic on the beats, because that's what I like the best :) If you listen in any of my songs, I put my focus in the beats, because that is what I'm best at. (Melodies = Bleh.) Let me know if you ever want a little help adding some beats. :)
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Your on the right track
I remember when I started out, songs I made sounded like these. They eventually led to many new ideas. Your drums didnt seem to flow the way I hoped. Test out new ways to make beats with the drumkits for a while and then test them with something simple like one bass sequence or something. You will Have the best results playing with bass and drums and make the bass different lengths of time. Then listen to the notes and make sure that they go with what you really want! The flangerized note would be great as ambiance and best to be set in the background a little further. To do this try making the note shorter, get more reverb, and decreasing the volume. I dont mean to sound too harsh though. Just remember I'm only critiqueing. Id love to hear some more stuff after you fiddle around for a while! Happy music making!