I like me some hard style.

You left a review on one of my submission while back asking me to check out your submission and give you a feed backs and such, Sorry it took me so long. Don't get on new grounds that often now days. Anyways here we go.
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Good
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Nice melodies!
I like the sound of that kick around 2:15
I see you are trying out many diff tricks and being clever with it.
Good effort
and nice FX you used for the intro of the song.
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Bad
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I'm really not a fan of the "toms" that you useed in 0:37
Synth can be much louder and sound more "harsh" if you know what I'm saying. Make it a bit more heavy.
although you used a good intro, i suggest coming up with better transition for some parts.
Leave few seconds at the end of the song so people will know that the song has ended, lol I was like "damn this is a long ass song" but I realized it was only about 3 minutes long.
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Overall
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It's good, I assume you're sort of new at this "hardstyle" genre, keep it up man. Start and the general idea of it are good. Keep practicing and keep up the good works. I suggest listening to some hard style artists. Like Dark Oscillators.

8/10
5/5
Check out my new songs when you have time.

-Elyon / Sumiyaka -

Its a good start

It is close but I feel as though it is far too simple. It feels a little like an empty stage of a poor one man show with only one or two props.

you are close so keep it up and you will have a great sound.