just like the dude below me
make sure the vocals are the same melody
Ok, My word of Advice -
The wobbs don't seem to go together at all, especially when you stop the melody. Keep the melody and then add the drops. Also, there doesn't seem to be a main point here- like, it's all thrown in randomly together. Ok, well, not randomly, but I think it could be done much better. Also, work on the bass. GIVE IT MOAR BASS. The bass seems to have a lot of treble.
Heres some help
Make sure that the vocals are at the correct tempo. You'll find that it'll all sound a lot better if the acapella is in sync with the rest of it. The synth melody (taken from the original) has a nice sound to it. The wobbles sound quite dark, really overpowering, which is a good thing in this song. At the start, however, the wobble synths don't really fit with the rest of the song, and it might be an idea to leave them out until the drop.
I can tell you're trying really hard though, the wobbles sounded like they took you a while to do, and my only advice regarding them is that they should really be louder than synth melody.
Nice try though, please don't take my review as an insult, I'm just trying to give you a little advice.
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