The song is very cool in some ways. Good Job!
Hey man! Why havn't you uploaded something to NG in so long! This stuff is good.
It's a pretty sweet song but there are some flaws. Since this is a mix between heavy metal and techno you have to be very careful to make sure neither dominates the other too much but also to make sure they don't clash together.
Honestly, what you have here isn't enough to be a techno... maybe enough to be a very bad heavy metal song.
However; in general the song is fine... it just could be much, much better. I reccomend staying with the basics of techno and bringing in a few metal touches, otherwise it will just be a bunch of mush. When you do genre-mixes you have to always make sure you don't lose the basics of the dominant genre. That's my main piece of advice.
its a good job but the sonic pain is still there from another song i listened to so i might be a bit low but overall its great. and these songs are real they are called heavy techno or metal techno depending on the persons like of rock
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.