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Lovin this song perticuarly.
Rate Comment please.
tell me whatever i did right and what i did wrong, or if u just liked the song. whatever is cool

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I am Adjeye-3

I want to comment on your reaction and I've looked to more songs of yours.

First of all, you probably it didn't took much time to make it..
try to not get lazy in you're songs, every detail in music is important.
When I first listened to it I thought, lets just vote a 2 because its probably a kind of newby. But I am one of the few who actually listened the whole song.
I thought you where a newby because the guitar didn't sounded human, the instrument is right from basic FL studio without a change in it. Probably all the instruments you used. You need to get something like Nexus or tone2 Gladiator.
If you have one of them, your sound will improve.

And one thing what I notesed that you didn't listened to peoples comments. Don't know if you tried. You have to, If I give someone a advice, And he don't do anything with it, I wont give him advice again..

For the beat, I have to say the ritm is good but the samples are really bad.. Try to get some vengeance packs (I use Vengeance essential club sounds3).

If you do everything I told you you probably get much good comments.

Please review my last song too! (Its called I need to be lonely)

12spike22 responds:

I really will look through alot of the comments again and try to work them into a future song i guess. and i am kinda newbie cause i still fail with alot of songs. im definately gonna check out ur songs and hope that helps me alot

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Mar 22, 2011
2:45 AM EDT
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1 min 54 sec

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