I am Adjeye-3

I want to comment on your reaction and I've looked to more songs of yours.

First of all, you probably it didn't took much time to make it..
try to not get lazy in you're songs, every detail in music is important.
When I first listened to it I thought, lets just vote a 2 because its probably a kind of newby. But I am one of the few who actually listened the whole song.
I thought you where a newby because the guitar didn't sounded human, the instrument is right from basic FL studio without a change in it. Probably all the instruments you used. You need to get something like Nexus or tone2 Gladiator.
If you have one of them, your sound will improve.

And one thing what I notesed that you didn't listened to peoples comments. Don't know if you tried. You have to, If I give someone a advice, And he don't do anything with it, I wont give him advice again..

For the beat, I have to say the ritm is good but the samples are really bad.. Try to get some vengeance packs (I use Vengeance essential club sounds3).

If you do everything I told you you probably get much good comments.

Please review my last song too! (Its called I need to be lonely)
~Adjeye-3

Sounds cool to me...

but it got a bit of lack of skills.
The guitar thingy is in the beginning a bit robotised..
I would have wanted it more purer.
The violin thingy on the background had t change smoothly, not in those bigg steps.
You also could have changed the melody somewhere.

For the guitar I recommend this tutorial: http://www.youtube.com/watchv=PImC21_
2HyU
Please follow it, and your songs will be a lot better!

Please don't be angry because I gave you critism, I only want to help you.

~Adjeye-3