It's to loud over the music, it's just way to loud in my opinion, cause I love the backing track. The vocals not bad, but it's just too loud. Also, I'm way to white for "gangsta" rap. But this isn't bad. So keep it up, just back off the rapping a bit and this would be good. Also, expand vocabulary, the N word doesn't need to be in every third sentence, just saying. It has no artistic value in this situation.
a newer mixed verion is on youtube. look it upby Slankz'D
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