You have done this song well. The beat bass and how that one insterment comes in.
Constructive Crititicism alert.
Though you've done that well, it seems like you overloaded your tracks when you mixed it, meaning you set your levels too high. Especially on the drums. When you set your levels, none of the lights should reach the top, at least not often.
Keep at it.
Yeah I'd have to agree with you there. something must have gone wrong with the last couple steps of polishing this. I'm gonna see what I can do to fix it.