It was pretty good

It was a pretty good song, nice attempt at tryin' to make your 1st dubstep song. The beat was very good, but could've been louder or somethin'. My main issue here is the wobble bass. Make it more wobbley, noticeable, & louder. The endin' is the next thing. Now I don't know if this helps, but at then end of the song, I usually don't hear this, only on some songs have i heard this, but try makin' the tempo go up faster and faster until all the sounds go all jumbled together and have a drop or somethin'. Overall, pretty good song, just work on the wobble bass. And to show an example of the mix up at the end, I'm gonna show you a song on a message and at the endin', listen to it very good at how the tempo increases.