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Thorns (Jeffaro)

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This song is about loving someone. But only for them to push you away and show no love in return. Here are the lyrics.

These thorns constrict.
They twist.
They split my heart.
I am drowning in my blood.
Why wont you help me get up?

Why can't I have the key to your heart?
Why can't I have the key to your heart?
Why can't I have the key to your heart?
Why won't you love me as I loved you?


Alright I suppose

This seems to be alright, not the best but I guess it has potential for being a good metal song anyways I guess. The main beat and lyrics here kind of cool sounding. The main thing to point out is I can not understand a word of what you say. You could speak up and make it more audible to what you are saying anyways.

The guitar sounds good which is cool. I like how it goes back between two notes then switches to the main riff. The drums have a good rhythm going on here as well. The bass line is simple yet nearly unhearable here.

Overall, speak up a little more and this should be a lot better.

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Jeffaro responds:

I didn't record bass for this song because my hand hurts when playing at this speed.

Also as far as the vocals go... I'm a shitty growler, so thats why I keep the vocal track at a low volume.


Sounds like Dream Theater ^^. I like the guitar!

Jeffaro responds:

Thanks for comparing it to Dream Theater!

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Credits & Info


4.15 / 5.00

Mar 20, 2011
5:54 PM EDT
Heavy Metal
File Info
1.6 MB
1 min 23 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.