Not bad!

Beat is pretty strong, although the mixing n stuff isn't perfect...

The structure is pretty much perfect really, pretty nice job :)

(Personal Opinion: The vocals are awful. The hi hats are really distracting..)

But that hasn't affected your score in anyway (:

Overall, the kick needs to be much punchier, lead needs to be turned down slightly, and the clap needs turned up slightly.

Not bad at all!

Keep up the good work :D

Your friend,
Dan Roth